Kate, you give out such great, tailored critiques. I will try my hand at one for you, but I don't think it will do justice to the level of detail you are able to give other people!
You did an outstanding job in the fourth image of the side of the library facing Briton plaza by taking a scene that us students pass by every single day. The image reworks this mundane part of our daily lives by capturing the fence and building to showcase their pure geometric qualities in the evening sun. I especially enjoy the fence's bold shadow cast onto the library, sharply descending into the ground.
The third image's composition strikes me as interesting, though I may suggest improving it by lowering the aperture in order to more clearly define the wall and its shadows while blurring out the background to the right.
I love all of the photos that you have taken. They look "professional" and seems like you've put up a lot of effort into getting them. The first one is my personal favorite. Good Job!
I absolutely love your second photo! I also really like the theme of shadows showcased in your first 3 images. The framing of your photographs are very centered as well which creates for a more interesting photograph. I'd highly encourage you to experiment with these images in Adobe Lightroom to see what could make these even better! Great Job!
Kate, you give out such great, tailored critiques. I will try my hand at one for you, but I don't think it will do justice to the level of detail you are able to give other people!
ReplyDeleteYou did an outstanding job in the fourth image of the side of the library facing Briton plaza by taking a scene that us students pass by every single day. The image reworks this mundane part of our daily lives by capturing the fence and building to showcase their pure geometric qualities in the evening sun. I especially enjoy the fence's bold shadow cast onto the library, sharply descending into the ground.
The third image's composition strikes me as interesting, though I may suggest improving it by lowering the aperture in order to more clearly define the wall and its shadows while blurring out the background to the right.
Well done!
I love all of the photos that you have taken. They look "professional" and seems like you've put up a lot of effort into getting them.
ReplyDeleteThe first one is my personal favorite.
Good Job!
I absolutely love your second photo! I also really like the theme of shadows showcased in your first 3 images. The framing of your photographs are very centered as well which creates for a more interesting photograph. I'd highly encourage you to experiment with these images in Adobe Lightroom to see what could make these even better! Great Job!
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